August
In the evening of the hottest day it rained.
It rained as if the day had been waiting all day to rain.
The sun still shone, a few small cumulus clouds
floating
It rained hard and silver,
parting the heat of the city with broad strokes.
Afterwards,
rain dripped from leaves and branches
for hours.
It rained as if the day had been waiting all day to rain.
The sun still shone, a few small cumulus clouds
floating
It rained hard and silver,
parting the heat of the city with broad strokes.
Afterwards,
rain dripped from leaves and branches
for hours.
posted by Sarah at 12:59 PM
1 Comments:
That's a good point. It ends up sounding and looking a little like a Haiku, which would make sense for the subject matter. I'm going to think about it for a while. Thanks.
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